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General description of the story.

There was once a man and that man had a dream and throughout his live he continued to work hard towards it. At first it seemed hopeless but after many years, when his hair already turned grey, he finally achieved it.

His dream was a creation of a different world, the world in which everything was possible and yet at the same time achieving anything meaningful would require incredible effort.

This world was given to others. Those that went there probably dreamed of slaying dragons and taking part in the great battles that would decide fates of kingdoms. They dreamed of becoming the greatest heroes or the most vicious villains. Still, soon enough those people realized that in this world even slaying a single boar could make them incredibly happy and that was because it was a reward of a true hard work.

While some people could do better than others, regardless of one’s talents, there was always someone above who would laugh at them for their weakness. There was nothing that could prepare one before entering this world and those who decided to so, were changed forever, even if they didn’t realizing it themselves.

First Chapter: Chapter 1 “Arthur Rain”

Warning: EOA isn’t meant to be a perfect story but it’s rather a story that I enjoy writing but it’s completely hobby style. What’s more it’s actually the first story that I wrote in English. (before that there were two stories in my native but they that didn’t even pass 50 pages) -that brings a lot of elements that reader wouldn’t want to see like (needless part that I also think that are needless, nevertheless they stay because if I already wrote them there is no reason to cut them) You have been warned.

 

“Other things”

To anyone who is having problems with the “unique” (made up) style of EOA’s dialogue. This page might help:
Dialogue help

“Different type of description”

Describing “eye of Adventure” in few words is not an easy task. Naturally it’s a written story that is more similiar to a Japanese light novel rather than anything else.

But the simplest answer to the question “What is this story about?” would be:

-It’s about people having fun while playing VRMMORPG game.

Other key informations that you might like to know before starting reading it.
-the EOA’s world is completely original and vast.
-the game system is also completely original
-time works differently in the game world, namely 1 hours in real world equals 5 hours in the EOA world.
-the story starts at the point where the game was released two years ago, so some ‘veteran players’ were theoretically playing EOA for 10 years already. This creates the setting where “protagonist” has a really long, long, long way to be able to compete with them. The story isn’t about the person who wants to badly become the best player though.
-story introduces many characters.
-the author is not ‘native English speaker’ or ‘English grammar expert’.
-the soul of the author is tainted with Japanese culture. Some things may(will) be strange/ridiculous for “normal readers”. (In general, even if the main themes of the story are sometimes dark and serious, most of the story is rather filled with “Happiness and Ridiculousness”)
-the story is quite long and it’s number of pages is scary.

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First Chapter: Chapter 1 “Arthur Rain”